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Vil du hjelpe meg å skrive en låt?

16.02.2015 - 13:02 19 kommentarer

Heia fine lesere!

Tenkte kanskje det hadde vært gøy å skrive en låt sammen med dere?



Er det noen som har en liten dikter eller låtskriver i magen så gjerne del idéer her

Refrenget er slik :

I wish we could fly, together
We don´t live, won't die, like feathers
And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.
How I wish we could fly
Kanskje dere vil komme med tips til vers?
Kommenter under :)
Her ligger låtene jeg har skrevet og utgitt i et siste :
Sandra Lyng : No Vera Wang

Sandra Lyng : LAPD (Handcuff Me)

Sandra Lyng : Wake Me Up (LA LA)

Sandra Lyng : Ends Collide

Sandra Lyng : Heels Off
Sandra Lyng / Lazee: PRTeY

Sandra Lyng: Don`t care

Sandra Lyng: Fuck Love




Ps. det er aldri en garanti for at det vil bli brukt eller utgitt, dette er kun for gøy, foreløping :)

19 kommentarer

Alma Austin

16.02.2015 kl.13:37

Bare et forslag jeg fant på i farten: dont cut my wings, i havet to fly this way. Det var dårlig men.....bare et forslag

Sandralyngfan

16.02.2015 kl.13:46

Don't stop, try aigan.

Det var dårligst da men.....

Lone

16.02.2015 kl.13:50

My heart wants to fly but I can't couse I lost my

wings. Ikke så bra da men❤️

Lone

16.02.2015 kl.13:59

My heart wants to fly but I can't couse I lost my

wings. I can't stop thinking of what we can do if I get my wings back couse I lost them when I falled.

Anonym låtskriver :)

16.02.2015 kl.14:09

Lets meet on the surface

Where we first met

Lets figure out this maze

And walk out of it

My dress is made of roses

Your face is my map

Come dance with my senses

And i'll make it all snap

I wish we could fly, together

We don´t live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly

Like a symphony of sounds

All our thoughts combines

Even the bad one's bounce

These is our escaping times

Bridge

I wish we could fly, together

We don´t live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly

Ann-Christin❤️

16.02.2015 kl.14:16

We could fly, fly right trough the skyes. And never come back again... Even if our bestfriend,

Yeah even if our bestfriend are crying out just because of us...

Noe jeg bare diktet opp her og nå, ikke så veldig bra, men bedre enn ingenting :)

Sandra

16.02.2015 kl.14:38

Hei! Eg e ei jenta frå Hardanger som like å synga og spela og skriva låter :) så eg tenkte at det hadde vert litt kult visst Sandra og Sandra skrev en låt ilag? :) ta kontakt om du vil :)

E 13 snart 14 ;)

Eskil

16.02.2015 kl.15:17

Hei😄 jeg heter Eskil er 15 år (99'er) og bor i Oslo, jeg er låtskriver å har skrevet en god del sanger og elsker deg virkelig👌 jeg ditcher lett en fest for å skrive liksom😂 jeg hadde syntes det hadde vært dritkult hvis vi kunne skrevet en sang sammen😄 kontakt meg på dette nummeret hvis du vil😊 håper du vil😄 +47 476 81 134

Linn Isabel Eielsen

16.02.2015 kl.15:54

When you wake up in the morning

Feeling like the night before

And the butterflies in your stomach

Won?t leave you anymore

And you walk around dreaming

That everything´s so great

And you decide thinking

That this has to be fate

But then the ground starts shaking

My heart starts breaking

The sight of him

Is so breath-taking

When I do all of the above

I know I?m in love

I wish we could fly, together

We don´t live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly

It was nice to play pretend

But I know that this will end

I can?t have a crush on you forever

But then again, never say never

I can?t seem to forget your smile

It?s been on my mind for a while

And I can?t get you outta? my head

Maybe I?ll just keep you in there instead

Singing

I wish we could fly, together

We don´t live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly

x2

Linn Isabel Eielsen

16.02.2015 kl.15:55

Linjedeling og alt ble helt feil. :/

Bjørn Gulbrandsen

16.02.2015 kl.16:49

Silver wings , let me fly with you, let me sit on you feather

Terese

16.02.2015 kl.16:58

Wandering in a dream to night,

watching life make it right,

I feel so wistful, so relived that I

was grately loved by you

unraveling what is meant to be

can you just be close to me

I wish we could fly, together

We don´t live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly

Breathless cries, both you and I

watching us, this can´t be a lie

Forcing this, ?cause I will untie

all that is holding me back

Shaping what I know can be

can you just be close to me

I wish we could fly, together

We don´t live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly

Terese

16.02.2015 kl.17:00

Wandering in a dream tonight,

watching life make it right,

I feel so wistful, so relieved that I

was greatly loved by you

unraveling what is meant to be

can you just be close to me

I wish we could fly, together

We don´t live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly

Breathless cries, both you and I

watching us, this can´t be a lie

Forcing this, ?cause I will untie

all that is holding me back

Shaping what I know can be

can you just be close to me

I wish we could fly, together

We don´t live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly

Pelle

17.02.2015 kl.10:41

Du burde skrive låtene dine selv, ikke få hjelp av alle hele tiden.

Silje_1998

17.02.2015 kl.11:17

Bare et forslag! Du kunne skrive en sang om hvor mye dansingen og dansecrewet betydde for deg :)

Fromfat2phat

17.02.2015 kl.20:34

Liker teksten i refrenget bortsett fra 'like feathers' - jeg skjønner ikke meningen, det har ingen mening slik jeg ser det; vi lever ikke, vil ikke/kommer ikke til å dø, som fjær..?

Mener det kun konstruktivt, men det slår meg som en dårlig setning og rett og slett litt mer som et nødrim for å få det til å rime på together. Ville skiftet ut med feks 'soar through the sky forever' eller 'there's nothing (/that) we can't weather' eller 'everything with you feels better'/'everything about you is better'. Just my two cents, søte Sandra:)

SandraLyng

17.02.2015 kl.22:23

Pelle: Dette er ikke ment som "hjelp" bare en morsom greie hvor vi deler musikkglede og tekstskriving sammen. Jeg har aldri fått "hjelp" men har hatt co-writers. All musikk jeg har gitt ut har jeg vært med å, eller skrevet helt selv.

Alexandra

18.02.2015 kl.05:15

Har noe som kanskje passer liggende fra før av da på en sang jeg egentlig aldri blir ferdig med for å si det slik. Synes refrenget virket ganske interesangt. Blir spennende å høre fremover!

vers1..

Lights around us, they're alive just for us

Pretty dancing northern light, just for us to find

I was a younger girl, hungry for some fun

I got my people, but somehow I need to run

(ditt ref)

*I wish we could fly, together

We don´t live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly*

vers 2..

Got on my feet again

Only to see you

How could I belive

Words like I love you

Nobody knew we

had to much fun

and if they'd see

we would just run

*for exaaampleeee. *

Marianne

18.02.2015 kl.15:02

Et kjapt lite forslag :

Talking about destiny

Talking about meant to be

You for me , me for You

I just wanna hold You tight

In my arms , in your arms

I cant even spend a minute away ,So never let go of my hand

I wish we could fly, together

We don´t live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly

I'll never let this feeling go , i'll never let us die

Love is strong , when it's right , It can't go wrong

Just trust in me , i'll trust in You

Strongest together , forever and ever

We will survive everything and everyone , just never let go of my hand

I wish we could fly, together

We don´t live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly

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