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Tenkte kanskje det hadde vrt gy skrive en lt sammen med dere?



Er det noen som har en liten dikter eller ltskriver i magen s gjerne del ider her

Refrenget er slik :

I wish we could fly, together
We dont live,won'tdie, like feathers
And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.
How I wish we could fly
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Her ligger ltene jeg har skrevet og utgitt i et siste :
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Sandra Lyng : LAPD (Handcuff Me)

Sandra Lyng : Wake Me Up (LA LA)

Sandra Lyng : Ends Collide

Sandra Lyng : Heels Off
Sandra Lyng / Lazee: PRTeY

Sandra Lyng: Don`t care

Sandra Lyng: Fuck Love




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19 kommentarer

Bare et forslag jeg fant p i farten: dont cut my wings, i havet to fly this way. Det var drlig men.....bare et forslag

Sandralyngfan

Sandralyngfan

Don't stop, try aigan.

Det var drligst da men.....

My heart wants to fly but I can't couse I lost my

wings. Ikke s bra da men❤️

My heart wants to fly but I can't couse I lost my

wings. I can't stop thinking of what we can do if I get my wings back couse I lost them when I falled.

Anonym ltskriver :)

Anonym ltskriver :)

Lets meet on the surface

Where we first met

Lets figure out this maze

And walk out of it

My dress is made of roses

Your face is my map

Come dance with my senses

And i'll make it all snap

I wish we could fly, together

We dont live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly

Like a symphony of sounds

All our thoughts combines

Even the bad one's bounce

These is our escaping times

Bridge

I wish we could fly, together

We dont live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly

Ann-Christin❤️

Ann-Christin❤️

We could fly, fly right trough the skyes. And never come back again... Even if our bestfriend,

Yeah even if our bestfriend are crying out just because of us...

Noe jeg bare diktet opp her og n, ikke s veldig bra, men bedre enn ingenting :)

Hei! Eg e ei jenta fr Hardanger som like synga og spela og skriva lter :) s eg tenkte at det hadde vert litt kult visst Sandra og Sandra skrev en lt ilag? :) ta kontakt om du vil :)

E 13 snart 14 ;)

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Linn Isabel Eielsen

Linn Isabel Eielsen

When you wake up in the morning

Feeling like the night before

And the butterflies in your stomach

Won?t leave you anymore

And you walk around dreaming

That everythings so great

And you decide thinking

That this has to be fate

But then the ground starts shaking

My heart starts breaking

The sight of him

Is so breath-taking

When I do all of the above

I know I?m in love

I wish we could fly, together

We dont live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly

It was nice to play pretend

But I know that this will end

I can?t have a crush on you forever

But then again, never say never

I can?t seem to forget your smile

It?s been on my mind for a while

And I can?t get you outta? my head

Maybe I?ll just keep you in there instead

Singing

I wish we could fly, together

We dont live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly

x2

Linn Isabel Eielsen

Linn Isabel Eielsen

Linjedeling og alt ble helt feil. :/

Bjrn Gulbrandsen

Bjrn Gulbrandsen

Silver wings , let me fly with you, let me sit on you feather

Wandering in a dream to night,

watching life make it right,

I feel so wistful, so relived that I

was grately loved by you

unraveling what is meant to be

can you just be close to me

I wish we could fly, together

We dont live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly

Breathless cries, both you and I

watching us, this cant be a lie

Forcing this, ?cause I will untie

all that is holding me back

Shaping what I know can be

can you just be close to me

I wish we could fly, together

We dont live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly

Wandering in a dream tonight,

watching life make it right,

I feel so wistful, so relieved that I

was greatly loved by you

unraveling what is meant to be

can you just be close to me

I wish we could fly, together

We dont live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly

Breathless cries, both you and I

watching us, this cant be a lie

Forcing this, ?cause I will untie

all that is holding me back

Shaping what I know can be

can you just be close to me

I wish we could fly, together

We dont live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly

Du burde skrive ltene dine selv, ikke f hjelp av alle hele tiden.

Bare et forslag! Du kunne skrive en sang om hvor mye dansingen og dansecrewet betydde for deg :)

Liker teksten i refrenget bortsett fra 'like feathers' - jeg skjnner ikke meningen, det har ingen mening slik jeg ser det; vi lever ikke, vil ikke/kommer ikke til d, som fjr..?

Mener det kun konstruktivt, men det slr meg som en drlig setning og rett og slett litt mer som et ndrim for f det til rime p together. Ville skiftet ut med feks 'soar through the sky forever' eller 'there's nothing (/that) we can't weather' eller 'everything with you feels better'/'everything about you is better'. Just my two cents, ste Sandra:)

Pelle: Dette er ikke ment som "hjelp" bare en morsom greie hvor vi deler musikkglede og tekstskriving sammen. Jeg har aldri ftt "hjelp" men har hatt co-writers. All musikk jeg har gitt ut har jeg vrt med , eller skrevet helt selv.

Har noe som kanskje passer liggende fra fr av da p en sang jeg egentlig aldri blir ferdig med for si det slik. Synes refrenget virket ganske interesangt. Blir spennende hre fremover!

vers1..

Lights around us, they're alive just for us

Pretty dancing northern light, just for us to find

I was a younger girl, hungry for some fun

I got my people, but somehow I need to run

(ditt ref)

*I wish we could fly, together

We dont live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly*

vers 2..

Got on my feet again

Only to see you

How could I belive

Words like I love you

Nobody knew we

had to much fun

and if they'd see

we would just run

*for exaaampleeee. *

Et kjapt lite forslag :

Talking about destiny

Talking about meant to be

You for me , me for You

I just wanna hold You tight

In my arms , in your arms

I cant even spend a minute away ,So never let go of my hand

I wish we could fly, together

We dont live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly

I'll never let this feeling go , i'll never let us die

Love is strong , when it's right , It can't go wrong

Just trust in me , i'll trust in You

Strongest together , forever and ever

We will survive everything and everyone , just never let go of my hand

I wish we could fly, together

We dont live, won't die, like feathers

And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.

How I wish we could fly

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