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Tenkte kanskje det hadde vært gøy å skrive en låt sammen med dere?
Er det noen som har en liten dikter eller låtskriver i magen så gjerne del idéer her
Refrenget er slik :
I wish we could fly, together
We don´t live, won’t die, like feathers
And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.
How I wish we could fly
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Bare et forslag jeg fant på i farten: dont cut my wings, i havet to fly this way. Det var dårlig men…..bare et forslag
Don’t stop, try aigan.
Det var dårligst da men…..
My heart wants to fly but I can’t couse I lost my
wings. Ikke så bra da men❤️
My heart wants to fly but I can’t couse I lost my
wings. I can’t stop thinking of what we can do if I get my wings back couse I lost them when I falled.
Lets meet on the surface
Where we first met
Lets figure out this maze
And walk out of it
My dress is made of roses
Your face is my map
Come dance with my senses
And i’ll make it all snap
I wish we could fly, together
We don´t live, won’t die, like feathers
And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.
How I wish we could fly
Like a symphony of sounds
All our thoughts combines
Even the bad one’s bounce
These is our escaping times
Bridge
I wish we could fly, together
We don´t live, won’t die, like feathers
And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.
How I wish we could fly
We could fly, fly right trough the skyes. And never come back again… Even if our bestfriend,
Yeah even if our bestfriend are crying out just because of us…
Noe jeg bare diktet opp her og nå, ikke så veldig bra, men bedre enn ingenting 🙂
Hei! Eg e ei jenta frå Hardanger som like å synga og spela og skriva låter 🙂 så eg tenkte at det hadde vert litt kult visst Sandra og Sandra skrev en låt ilag? 🙂 ta kontakt om du vil 🙂
E 13 snart 14 😉
Hei😄 jeg heter Eskil er 15 år (99’er) og bor i Oslo, jeg er låtskriver å har skrevet en god del sanger og elsker deg virkelig👌 jeg ditcher lett en fest for å skrive liksom😂 jeg hadde syntes det hadde vært dritkult hvis vi kunne skrevet en sang sammen😄 kontakt meg på dette nummeret hvis du vil😊 håper du vil😄 +47 476 81 134
When you wake up in the morning
Feeling like the night before
And the butterflies in your stomach
Won?t leave you anymore
And you walk around dreaming
That everything´s so great
And you decide thinking
That this has to be fate
But then the ground starts shaking
My heart starts breaking
The sight of him
Is so breath-taking
When I do all of the above
I know I?m in love
I wish we could fly, together
We don´t live, won’t die, like feathers
And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.
How I wish we could fly
It was nice to play pretend
But I know that this will end
I can?t have a crush on you forever
But then again, never say never
I can?t seem to forget your smile
It?s been on my mind for a while
And I can?t get you outta? my head
Maybe I?ll just keep you in there instead
Singing
I wish we could fly, together
We don´t live, won’t die, like feathers
And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.
How I wish we could fly
x2
Linjedeling og alt ble helt feil. :/
Silver wings , let me fly with you, let me sit on you feather
Wandering in a dream to night,
watching life make it right,
I feel so wistful, so relived that I
was grately loved by you
unraveling what is meant to be
can you just be close to me
I wish we could fly, together
We don´t live, won’t die, like feathers
And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.
How I wish we could fly
Breathless cries, both you and I
watching us, this can´t be a lie
Forcing this, ?cause I will untie
all that is holding me back
Shaping what I know can be
can you just be close to me
I wish we could fly, together
We don´t live, won’t die, like feathers
And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.
How I wish we could fly
Wandering in a dream tonight,
watching life make it right,
I feel so wistful, so relieved that I
was greatly loved by you
unraveling what is meant to be
can you just be close to me
I wish we could fly, together
We don´t live, won’t die, like feathers
And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.
How I wish we could fly
Breathless cries, both you and I
watching us, this can´t be a lie
Forcing this, ?cause I will untie
all that is holding me back
Shaping what I know can be
can you just be close to me
I wish we could fly, together
We don´t live, won’t die, like feathers
And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.
How I wish we could fly
Du burde skrive låtene dine selv, ikke få hjelp av alle hele tiden.
Bare et forslag! Du kunne skrive en sang om hvor mye dansingen og dansecrewet betydde for deg 🙂
Liker teksten i refrenget bortsett fra ‘like feathers’ – jeg skjønner ikke meningen, det har ingen mening slik jeg ser det; vi lever ikke, vil ikke/kommer ikke til å dø, som fjær..?
Mener det kun konstruktivt, men det slår meg som en dårlig setning og rett og slett litt mer som et nødrim for å få det til å rime på together. Ville skiftet ut med feks ‘soar through the sky forever’ eller ‘there’s nothing (/that) we can’t weather’ eller ‘everything with you feels better’/’everything about you is better’. Just my two cents, søte Sandra:)
Pelle: Dette er ikke ment som “hjelp” bare en morsom greie hvor vi deler musikkglede og tekstskriving sammen. Jeg har aldri fått “hjelp” men har hatt co-writers. All musikk jeg har gitt ut har jeg vært med å, eller skrevet helt selv.
Har noe som kanskje passer liggende fra før av da på en sang jeg egentlig aldri blir ferdig med for å si det slik. Synes refrenget virket ganske interesangt. Blir spennende å høre fremover!
vers1..
Lights around us, they’re alive just for us
Pretty dancing northern light, just for us to find
I was a younger girl, hungry for some fun
I got my people, but somehow I need to run
(ditt ref)
*I wish we could fly, together
We don´t live, won’t die, like feathers
And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.
How I wish we could fly*
vers 2..
Got on my feet again
Only to see you
How could I belive
Words like I love you
Nobody knew we
had to much fun
and if they’d see
we would just run
*for exaaampleeee. *
Et kjapt lite forslag :
Talking about destiny
Talking about meant to be
You for me , me for You
I just wanna hold You tight
In my arms , in your arms
I cant even spend a minute away ,So never let go of my hand
I wish we could fly, together
We don´t live, won’t die, like feathers
And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.
How I wish we could fly
I’ll never let this feeling go , i’ll never let us die
Love is strong , when it’s right , It can’t go wrong
Just trust in me , i’ll trust in You
Strongest together , forever and ever
We will survive everything and everyone , just never let go of my hand
I wish we could fly, together
We don´t live, won’t die, like feathers
And when darkness paints the light, we are fireflies in the night.
How I wish we could fly